Please update my paper the same as the attached reference paper also consider the feedback from the professor.
Feedback: As we discussed in our course a proper literature review for a dissertation is a critical assessment of the resources you have gathered, read, and analyzed/reported on surrounding your topic and subjects surrounding your topic, and then identifies a “gap” in that literature that your research will attempt to address. Your submission does not strongly support a gap in the literature to support your research.
Your current draft is not at proficient graduate-level writing. As suggested during our course, you would benefit greatly from working with the Writing Center. Unfortunately, I am unsure there is sufficient time to work with them this week prior to grades being posted for the course.
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